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  • Writing Activities Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game

    For hours, nothing but the scratching of pencil on paper could be heard. He drew slowly, tracing the image in his head and then afterwards shading the appropriate areas. He ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: 360,000 words in 90 Days?

    Haha yeah. I love it when things change, too, but I'm also a little OCD about it. (^_^) I like to know how long what I'm writing is going to ...

    Jun 10, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: 360,000 words in 90 Days?

    That sounds crazy. I can never estimate how long my novels or scenes will be, because most of the time they change half way through. Sometimes my characters suddenly do ...

    Jun 9, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Infodumping

    Thanks for the help, everyone. I have a clearer idea of what I want to do now. Suzanne, that makes a whole lot of sense. I will try writing from ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Infodumping

    I'm having huge problems with my sci-fi story. It's the beginning. I have rewritten it hundreds of times, but nothing seems to work the way I want it to, mostly ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What makes a good villiain?

    Here is what I think a villain should be like. 1: They should speak like a villain. They should scare you with their words, and reveal how bad they are ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Thought Speak

    I once read a book which had telepathic thoughts like this. --Hello, I'm talking to you telepathically. I think that's the best way. (normal thoughts were just in italics)

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    4. Breaking Dawn (Ugh. No plot, no character development. Boring!) No character development? Bella turns into a vampire. But yeah, it still sucked. I wanted a huge fight at the ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Ways to keep a reader interested and get more likes!

    The best way to get likes is to review other stories and make friends. I don't think you should tailor your story to keep people interested (like, overusing cliffhangers and ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: I can't start one! huhu :'(

    I would advise against writing the ending or middle of your story first. I write in a linear fashion, just how life goes. In a line. Also, it's easier to ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    5th: The Wasp Factory 4th: New Moon 3rd: Eclipse 2nd: Twilight 1st: Breaking Dawn

    Jun 7, 2010


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