TheEstimableEelz

Very cool poem! The grammar is off-kilter often, but that gives this poem its unique, worn/torn feel, as though the vagrancy has reduced the speaker's sanity. However, it is disconcerting ...

Why, why dost thou mock me so?? Ye cruel and bastard, fluffing harpy stabbing-piercing-purging flow of metaphysical blood; slash lines in Sharpie searing my mind in alternation with flaying, giving ...

Nice. Even more so for one who doesn't dabble in the form frequently. Editing first: Limited are the capabilities of a person futile are our attempts to be anything more ...

On midday last in Rotterdam I murdered my professor, his final act of teaching set to broaden my horizons. The planning phase, so highly lauded, was my ‘how-to’ thesis course. ...

Acrostics are fun! I wrote an acrostic sonnet once... although I mixed up the rhyme scheme between the two sonnet types. Edits first: Shriek and shrill within my heart, Omnipresent ...

Cool poem! To begin with, editing time: She ran hot water over her hand. The blue of her veins turned green Eelz says: I'd break this line here. to her ...

Amusing! I hardly get to read any rhyming poetry nowadays, and I must say that it can be delightful at times. The second-to-last line really wasn't long enough, I think. ...

Lounging in your bed, eating grand bananas, throw the peels - to the ground, then you slip on the peels and you fall - on the ground and you knock ...

And yet still peaceful the wind shreds seedlings afresh; spring's chipper chipmunk.

Flutter slash flutter slash knock it off - warped patterns lose their flawed continuity. Softly jagged points of elongation needlessly prolong extraneous figments laminar and thin; the skinny skydiver

Fun poem! I love these types of topics. The good for me (and probably all who read this) is the whimsical nature, the writing of a poem about a single ...

Interesting poem. The sound of it is pretty fun at the start of the first stanza and throughout the third, but semi-dark elsewhere (kinda like the reviews here are supposed ...

Neat poem. Fun to read, the pace is fast enough that a person don't stop to think about what he or she's reading, just get flashes of whatever cool image ...

Neo Tao People seem scary, Can’t relax for a second; Cat sleeps regardless. Haiku (yeah, I really shouldn't, I know) made for a bashful friend that in hindsight works well ...

The Mice Should Have Checked Out Classroom 042 Yaaaaaaawn! Sounds, coming from a faraway place; your bets – anyone, anyone? – Professor calls out, nobody's listening; his voice may as ...