TheEstimableEelz

Obfuscating : obscure, unclear, confounding Gekokujou : from Japanese - usurpation, overtaking of the higher- by the lower-ranked.

Starting out simply, we laugh and we smile: All the world's a joy and all of us joyous... Complications arise, doubt starts to form: Treasures are flung about, our minds ...

Interesting poem. Commanded my attention from beginning to end, no wavering. The line and stanza breaks are excellent - they allow the words to let through the spirit of the ...

I’m in stitches – ah! Do not laugh at my condition whilst propagating eleven to one the times of nihilism within confinement; soaring flights beyond the paradigm only brief respites ...

Great poem-song! I could really feel this as an enthusiastically-aggressive rap. My only issue was that it seemed to slow down once or twice just because it ran out of ...

O Sunny Mao 'Twas a brilliant day in China, and the sun was out in force – patrolling the streets as if secret police, out with the old and dust: ...

Solid. The subject matter is tired, but this successfully treats it as fresh and interesting. Free verse, though wonderful, isn't very surprising, and nowadays I see more of it than ...

Interesting poem. Suggestions in red, critiques in blue. I'm a young old wise fool stumbling in light line break here adds sense and sensibility who boldly shrinks yet fights yet ...

Interesting. I like the structure you created. Disagree with the previous review - I enjoyed the simplicity of your language. The title, though, is a bit too direct and cliché ...

Isolation nothing new but normally from a zero-momentum reference frame. The brain is relaxed using only ten percent less even than approval ratings of sociopathic politicians posing via conditioned s

Welcome to the site! Liking this poem, I can feel Erika's style. (You've got a couple of grammatical errors though.) ^^;; Hopefully the site and you will agree for a ...

Intriguing. Looking at grammar and such first. These eyes don ' t judge. They only try to discover What you are or what you 're like. These ears only listen. ...

I like the concept here. The list format is okay - you make it better by the unlikely connectedness of the items within. The title has a nice alliteration and ...

Neat. Grammar and such first: Standing lonely, silent, on the dusty windowsill In tarnished silver, brilliant and white There is a candle... and wick faintly glowing The warm flame lines ...

Remove me from the land of Nod upon the beginning of October: the second rodent obtains the degenerate milk product, though the prime-arriving hand-bird acquires the mud-crawler – half the ...