TheEstimableEelz

Ooh, new leader team! But it's not us...

I enjoyed this poem. Rhyme/repetition, as well as simplicity, in the first stanza really brought the reader into the idea-world of this leaky/flawed faucet. Second stanza, I do feel the ...

Cool piece. Quick review from TheEstimableEelz incoming. Your idea is good, nothing special - but you make it great with the words you use to back it up in writing. ...

Welp, I totally missed that. Dinner and all.

Tie third? *shock* *happiness* *review time!!*

Sure, why not. Also, Respect your elders. ;P

Thoroughly enjoyable. Amazing tone work - it portrayed serious bits when it had to, but man does it sounds Seuss-ian (major compliment, in case that was unclear)! That said, the ...

Someone needs to make actual for-fun odds... Team Staff at 13:1 against Team Yellow at 10:1 against Team Red at 7.5:1 against Team Blue at 5:1 against Team Green at ...

Team post activity! But seriously, do we have any actual strategy or are we being the awesome people we are and winging it?

Well, that was nice. I must admit, the title is misleading. It led me very much to believe that some literal game would be occurring. Not that what you actually ...

Whee!- another pretty poem by Persy. :) Gonna try to give a legitimate review here, so... here goes. The weakest bit of this was the choice of line breaks. Thoughts ...

Well, this was fun. DEATH speaking about death... great topic. And you pulled it off fairly well. DEATH here has a consistent tone very similar to things I have read ...

A sonnet! And one I didn't notice was a sonnet initially, at that. (And though irrelevant, your signature gave me moment to chuckle.) Most noticeable thing: no periods. The pure ...

For a Hobbes-ian month of the year!

This is (somehow) way more intense than I was led to believe - I might faint at some point. Hooray! Hurray! Huzzah! Now to do more reviews and feel insignificant.