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Re: Title: Chapter One
Okay, that makes more sense. Great job on the story by the way! Elaine, TheEpicTurtle
Jun 2, 2017 -
Re: Beginning of a story (edited) (advice needed!)
Thanks for your review naxoll! I wasn't quite sure how to describe some of the things you mentioned without sounding to overdescriptive, but I'll try to figure it out. Thanks ...
Jun 1, 2017 -
Re: Beginning of a story (edited) (advice needed!)
Hi EternalRain! I should've changed the title to "Part of a short story", sorry about that. And thanks for the ideas about her dad; I live in a household with ...
Jun 1, 2017 -
Re: Beginning of a story (edited) (advice needed!)
Thanks Aleta! I was unsure how to word some of it, but your review definitely helps. Thanks again! Elaine, TheEpicTurtle
Jun 1, 2017