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Re: Title: Chapter One
Hi Junel! I really like the ideas you have here for a story; though some of it was a little bit confusing. Did Adelaide go back in time in the ...
Jun 2, 2017 -
Re: Antlers - Prologue
Hey Falconer! Great idea, I generally don't read fantasy, but this beginning is really good. The characters are relatable, and you have a great backstory. It is a little bit ...
Jun 1, 2017 -
Re: For the Love of Mayo
Hey rosette! I love this story; I can totally relate. Sometimes, a person really needs their mayo, and I found each of the characters to be absolutely hilarious. My mother ...
May 27, 2017