TheEccentricScribe

It's not that complicated, really. I think you're just putting too much thought into it.

I'm pretty sure the semi-colon's use is correct. Thanks a lot for the review! Edit: By the way, the cop says the line.

I would like to make it emphatically clear that I do NOT think Ist chose the right thing. Killing them was wrong. That is one interpretive point that I will ...

It's not a love poem. I'll see what I can do to strengthen it. Thanks.

Now, see, ShadowTwit, that is a perfectly legitimate comment. I want to know that you don't like the story's style. I'm glad that you can state that as "I don't ...

The first two paragraphs are absolutely unnecessary to the story. And it is for thematic reasons, therefore, that they are absolutely vital to the story. If you didn't feel that ...

Thanks. I don't know about brilliant, but I do have a lot of ideas. It's not cohesive at all, I agree. But, um, well. It's something to write, I suppose. ...

It's taken me a while to reply to this post, mostly because I've been thinking about it a lot. Lately, I've come to the novel Joseph Andrews, by Henry Fielding, ...

I apologize if I came off as mocking. That wasn't my intention. I will warn you, though, that making asides as in that paragraph is a pretty basic aspect of ...

I've been criticized for a lot of things, but never before has anyone criticized me for not describing my characters in a laundry list. "Fee was blah blah blah" is ...

Thanks for the reviews. This is a very old story of mine, and as it stands, I happen to hate it. I'm probably going to entirely rewrite it when I ...

WD: Sometimes, I just sort of rant. Doesn't necessarily mean I was insulted or being defensive. I just talk too much half of the time, lol. I didn't feel infringed ...

ShadowTwit, and by extension, Writersdomain: I apologize if my reply came off as obstinate or single-minded, or even dismissive of your reviews. That was not at all my intention. It's ...

I appreciate the comments on this story. I would like to make a few replies. I am aware of the work of Peter S. Beagle. I am of the opinion ...

Kirstybree: There is a fundamental difference between poetry and prose, and it's this. Writing a novel, or even a short story, is rather like driving a car. You may drive ...