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Re: (third edit) Power of Pop Secret- Erik's View- Part 1
I really like this. I felt the confusion and the pain the son had when his father told him that his mother wanted him. I could actually picture what was ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: A Ballet Mystery
I love this, but your title says A Ballet Mystery. I'm kind of not seeing the mystery part in this, but i am hopeing that you will write more.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking
I really like it so far, can't wait to read more.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Fatal love
I really this poem, but I can't help feeling that it should be long. I don't mean that the poem shoudl be longer, I mean I think it should be ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Frozen Love, Heated Pain
Wow this was so good. I love that you were very discriptive, and you paid attetion to detils
Oct 8, 2010