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Re: Story Snippet #2
“Listen Daniel as long as I am not around, Araina will be safe.” “Acayla what are you saying?” “Araina looks nothing like me. So if I’m not around then no ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: A Ballet Mystery
I love this, but your title says A Ballet Mystery. I'm kind of not seeing the mystery part in this, but i am hopeing that you will write more.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking
I really like it so far, can't wait to read more.
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Sea DT
Name: Gennifer Shaw Age: 18 Gender: Female Rank: a former lady-in-waiting, until she was kidnapped and now is a captive Ship/Port: The Lyttleton Appearance: about 5’4, with long dark brown ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Sea *Dead*
Name : Gennifer Shaw Age : 18 Gender : Female Rank : a former lady-in-waiting, until she was kidnapped and now is a captive Ship / Port : The Golden ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Fatal love
I really this poem, but I can't help feeling that it should be long. I don't mean that the poem shoudl be longer, I mean I think it should be ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Frozen Love, Heated Pain
Wow this was so good. I love that you were very discriptive, and you paid attetion to detils
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: The Curses of Elsa: a medeival 'witch girl'
This was a very interesting piece of literature. It kept my attention, which does not happen often. I would like to read more if it. To me the story kind ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Christmas Monologue
This has been a Christmas I’ll never forget. It was Christmas Eve. Families were rushing home from work to sing carols and wrap the remaining presents. But this was no ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Poof -- to Sare
Wow Poof look's so real
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Tell me which sound better!
Situation 1 Lysisa had Danica on her knees, he struck her and she fell to the floor. Jesse busted through the door, Lysisa was terrified he did not know that ...
May 8, 2010 -
Re: Story Snippet #1
“What be your name; I must know the name of the violet eyes.” She turned to him. “You know not my name, nor will I tell you.” He asked “You ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: The New Girl In Town
Hello, my name is Chelsea, but that's just my cover name. I am a superhero, my name THE EASE DROPPER . I am new to this site. I am a ...
May 4, 2010