TheEaseDropper

I enjoyed this, being dyslexic I couldn't really tell if there were any spelling mistakes or a misuse in punctuation so I guess that means I thought it was good. ...

I totally agree with the both of you. And your not being harsh, the whole point of this site is so that writers can have other writers read and give ...

I really like this, the heroism and the bravery of the man to protect the one he loves appeals to me. I have always had a soft spot for stories ...

I have always wondered about death. I wonder what happens to us when we die. Does it hurt? Is it the light at the end of the tunnel, or some ...

Normally when I read something like this I dont expect much out of them, but with this I almost cried. I felt the pain of the character and I like ...

I thought the story line was good, but I was having a little issue with the gender of the person speaking. Was it a girl or a guy. Also is ...

I fell in love with this piece of writing. It triggered all of my emotions, love, hate, sorrow, pain, and did I mention love.

I absoulutely love this. Keep writing.

Oh my gosh I loved this. It was really awesome. Can't wait to read the second part. Which I'm fixing to do right now.

Good. Short, very short. But it was short sweet and to the point, which is always awesome.

I really like this, and it's so true. Even though I have never been in a realatioship I felt the pain and the hardness of being dumped.

thank you

She sat alone early Sunday morning, her head leaning against the cool glass, gazing out at the world she once knew. Everything she once held close to her nothing more ...

Wow that was really deep. Very descriptive, I could literally see myself in that room. Oh and nice word choice, it's amazing how much descriptive words describe a story.

I really like this. I felt the confusion and the pain the son had when his father told him that his mother wanted him. I could actually picture what was ...