TheCrimsonQuill

The only word my mind could conjure up was Fantastic. I'm not really big in poetry and such, but this is utterly amazing. Good job :D

Yet another wonderful piece from you :D I'm not exactly sure if I told you this already, but I have fallen in love with your descriptions and imagery. Keep up ...

This is actually part of another novel I'm working on. It's my first time writing in a wolf's point of view so if you have anything to say about it, ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing your work now :) As she continued to wonder, she could smell that raunchy Calvin Klein perfume, she felt sweat drop onto her body and ...

You've left me speechless. The amount of emotion I felt blew me away! One comment: Just like the first reviewer had said, 'evermore' doesn't quite fit, but it kind of ...

Chapter Three Azrael I am the Alpha... Sunlight washed over my bedroom, hitting my closed eyelids as it did so. I shifted under the heavy sheets. I didn’t want to ...

Hi! Okay, first off, great choice for a title. It grabbed my attention just like that :) One comment I have to make is the amount of information you put ...

Hi :) I've got to say this got me hooked. I felt as if it should have been a tad bit longer, but you still got your point out nonetheless. ...

Hello! It's me again ;) I've found some typo's and stuff, but I can see people already corrected them for you so I'm not going to hound you about it. ...

All I have to say is: Wow. I can't seem to find anything wrong with it. Or maybe I was just too hooked to even look for mistakes o_o

Hello! I'm really not good at intros, so I'll just jump to the case, okay? First of all, I felt as if the story could have had more of a ...

Hello, I'll be making a few comments about your wonderful piece :) My suggestions are in bold. Tonight , they were to attack. I just thought that maybe it would ...

Ladies and gentlemen, Boys and girls, May I have your full, undivided attention, please? I would like all of you to close your eyes, And imagine a world full of ...

Hello:D I don't demand. All my comments are suggestions or corrections. The engine was shut off and all noise was eliminated before too much attention could be drawn. I'm not ...

Okay so this is really, really, REALLY rough. I've written this chapter about seven times. This one was done at two AM (that's when I finally gave up). I'll surely ...