TheCrimsonLady

I'll tell you the same thing I told Hannah. The characters aren't characters. This was me and my best friend. I just needed to get some stuff off of my ...

Ahem. This was literally what happened in my life. These aren't characters, they're me and my best friend.

What did you think Daniel was to me when you read this?

Eh. I wanted to make the beginning dull, because that's now I felt

No, just give Sedna some distinct character traits that differentiate her from Artemis other than how they look.

Use something more mysterious. Track record, or what I've done, or something like that. Be more vague

Great!

Aww, sorry about the harshness. A lot of people are feeling this way after reading my reviews form last night, I think.

I definitely meant the praise part. If you look at some of my other reviews, there's absolutely no praise in them. :) Also, yeah, I hadn't read the previous chapters, ...

I definitely meant the praise part. If you look at some of my other reviews, there's absolutely no praise in them. :) Also, yeah, I hadn't read the previous chapters, ...

I definitely meant the praise part. If you look at some of my other reviews, there's absolutely no praise in them. :) Also, yeah, I hadn't read the previous chapters, ...

I definitely meant the praise part. If you look at some of my other reviews, there's absolutely no praise in them. :) Also, yeah, I hadn't read the previous chapters, ...

I definitely meant the praise part. If you look at some of my other reviews, there's absolutely no praise in them. :) Also, yeah, I hadn't read the previous chapters, ...

I definitely meant the praise part. If you look at some of my other reviews, there's absolutely no praise in them. :) Also, yeah, I hadn't read the previous chapters, ...

I definitely meant the praise part. If you look at some of my other reviews, there's absolutely no praise in them. :) Also, yeah, I hadn't read the previous chapters, ...