TheCrimsonLady

Hello, love! I haven't actually read chapter one in this novel, and I'll be the first to admit that. I think I understand the novel pretty well, though, so here's ...

Hello, love! Can I say I love this take you have.. taken... on Nephilim? A few technical errors: These words echoes eerily through Kia’s brain as she shot awake. These ...

Wow. I really lke what you've done here. A lot of the language is metaphorical, as lyrics tend to be, but still. I loved it. Especially this part: The first ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a quick review! So to begin with, I actually really like the concept you've got going on here. It's definitely been tried before, especially in ...

Hello! Aurora here for a quick review! Hmm... lets see. "I noticed you staring, and I felt it necessary to give you my name and number. Text me when you ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a review! Well then. This prologue is very prologue-likeish. That's not a bad thing, considering the fact that even the prologues I write myself are ...

So.. it appears that my internet is not gone... Onto the next chapter!!! So your pacing was okay, although the time skip between chapters confused me. Also, in your first ...

Hey! Aurora here for -hopefully- a long review. But that really depends on how long my meager internet access lasts, so.... Let's start off with technicalities, love. In his right ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a review! So I really like where this is going. I also am in love with your title. So onto the actual review part of ...

Hello, love! Aurora here for a review! So to start with, I had one major problem with this piece. (It's actually not that bad, it's only a teensy nitpick) Your ...

Hello! Here for a review. Your grammar needs a lot of work. I'm not going to point out all of the technicalities here because, no offense, that would be a ...

Hi Raven! I haven't read your previous chapter, sorry love :) But I'll still review this one. To begin with, why don't we go over technicalities first (Oh, that's redundant. ...

I really liked this poem! It shows great potential. I like the straight A repetition, and I thought it would be nicer if it went throughout the poem as well. ...

Hi love! Aurora here for a long-due review!!! So to begin with, lets go over the technicalities, shall we? Well, look at that... there aren't any! Or if there are, ...

Really? Why the cliffhanger??? You can't do that! You just can't!!!!! Anyway, let's get down to business. Technicalities: Running through the woods quickly, Castor arrived at a spot where a ...