TheClosetKidnapper

It'll add suspense and contradict what he's saying.

Like, " 'm ine, aya " instead of saying "I'm fine, Rayah."

Pix, I have an idea. Since Jace isn't there at the moment and I've taken the role as Jason only until he comes back, I think that he should either ...

Jason walks over to the girls and leans against one of the walls, looking out the window as well. Not that he'd admit it, but he feels a lesser feeling ...

Jason "Can you help him?" She asks, wiping her face. I nod and close my eyes, touching Andrew's cold wrist. The box comes together and is wrapped in my mind, ...

Read it. It's good. You use 'your' a lot when you're supposed to use 'you're', but it's fine beyond that.

Name: Rylet Carney Age: 16 Gender: Female Appearance: Rylet.jpg History: Rylet is apply because she loves a challenge. She was born into a family consisting of athletes and was passed ...

Alright, I need to know who's going to remain in this SB. Over the past few weeks, several of you have just kind of dropped from the story, disappearing into ...

Brent After packing my things and seeing to it that Isaac had, I clear my throat to gain everyone's attention. I notice that Vixen disappeared and that Shanaya is crying ...

Jason Gemini disappears and soft sobbing comes from the hallway. Rayah? I recognize the voice. Why would she be crying? Confused and slightly concerned, I make my way into the ...

MM, I don't mean to nag, but Valentinos.

A young girl steps into the coffee shop and sits at a booth by the door, glancing around. Her auburn hair is wet from the rain and her hazel eyes ...

Lol. Wow

That's cool, MM. And why are you embarassed, Pix? We all say/do weird things when no one is watching...

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