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Re: Prologue - Kindness
Thank you so much! This is my first time writing anything for real so i am really glad you enjoyed it!
Sep 14, 2017 -
Re: A Mystery at Lint High: Chapter One
I find your way of describing things very nice. They show me what it looks like and how mr ness feels. I really liked the first person perspective - it ...
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: A Mystery at Lint High: Chapter One
Oh my god! This is great! I feel we have a similar style of writing! I love the descriptions and everything! Nice work!
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 1
Very nicely written! However you did use a lot of descriptive words, instead of moving it along. Very nice, though! I like the content!
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 1
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Sep 13, 2017
Very nicely written! However you did use a lot of descriptive words, instead of moving it along. Very nice, though! I like the content!