TheBucketman

Ago years seven and score four...

Ok, thanks!

Hey! Welcome to YWS, SarcastiC! It's great to see another new member! Funny thing, that's exactly how I found this site, by trying to get a forum to share my ...

"She wears a dress of flowers and ivy. Breathes life as other look upon her with ency. Her beauty diminishes as smoke fills her lungs. Begging for air, as it ...

I thought this was amazing. The whole setting seems calm, but in an eerie way, and everything is described so perfect and wonderfully. Personally, I think Sam is a well ...

Oh, yes. I forgot a question. Do you happen to use a program by the name of Scratch? Because if yo do, my username is the same as it is ...

Besides scattered profanity, I liked it. And actually, the swearing actually added to the affect of talking to a complete lunatic who has lost it. It's sort of eerie in ...

An average joe who is taking his anger out on a pickle jar that just won't open. The Bucketman

Hey, welcome to YWS! Hopefully you'll like it here, because there's people to help you in just about every aspect of writing! I'd like to know a little more about ...

Very dramatic, and makes me feel... depressed. Also, I think it's a bit cliché, with the whole, "hobo in a box on the side of the street." Other than that ...

I definitely found it interesting, but I was a bit confused while reading it. I'm not quite sure what the narrator realized, but did his friend commit suicide, or something? ...

Ice Ice Baby The Penguin Spork Pat Buchanan Dean

Hey YWSers, I'm open to review your work. I will review any writing whatsoever, wether it is a poem, novel, or short story. Genre does not matter either, so I'm ...

I'm glad I took the time to read this. Even though it was a long poem, I enjoyed... and I'm not the biggest poem fan. Each stanze was powerful in ...

7/10. The cat is pretty cute.