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Re: Checkout Line Oddities
Sorry, Jonny. It's just my style. Thanks, Porcelain. I love that line. See what you think about this: It's similar in style. Thanks for reading, Blue
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: I'm a What?-Bender
Yeah, I read it first. I just didn't have anything new to say about it. I didn't like it as much as the sequel, and I had the same resevations ...
Nov 17, 2007 -
Re: The Scar 1/2
Hey girl, Good start, I haven't read part II yet, but I'm hooked. There are a couple of places it seems a little off-balance, and I think you're writing too ...
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: The Hero of Treal (working title)
Hey Elite, Thanks for reviewing this. You hold very tenable ground. I shall break up the entire story--I copied it from word where I have it double spaced, so I ...
Nov 15, 2007