TheBlueStreak

I read to the part about "no criminal charges" and could't finish. This is the most disgusting thing I have encountered, period. What could possess someone to do something like ...

This could have gone in non-fiction, but I can't verify anything I claim in this paper, so I thought it would be safer here. Enjoy (I hope) ------------------------------------------------------------

Another great ending. On the whole your work improved since the first encounter we had with Sera and Thom. There are still some of the same issues, but now they're ...

Hey and Welcome, Monument, I'm new around here too, so I won't be much help with some things,but give me a holler if there's anything I can do. Take Care, ...

Hey girl, Good start, I haven't read part II yet, but I'm hooked. There are a couple of places it seems a little off-balance, and I think you're writing too ...

Hey Man, I agree completely with Twit on all the technical issues, and with Amelia about the pronoun use, but otherwise I loved it. I'm not sure if it was ...

Hey Bear, Sorry, but it seemed quite stited in places, and a few typos really detracted from the overall impact. Conversely, I loved the premise. I would be very interested ...

Hey Elite, Thanks for reviewing this. You hold very tenable ground. I shall break up the entire story--I copied it from word where I have it double spaced, so I ...

THE HERO OF TREAL Chapter 1 Beginnings Two figures on horseback raced across an open plain, stopped barely long enough to eat a hurried meal, and set off again. Khalid ...

Hey, Okay, I spoke too soon. This really completed the first part. Again, some minor technical issues and punctuation detract from the overall impact of the work, but not much. ...

Hey there, In short, I was enthralled. The beginning was a little confusing, but it served to keep my attention, and all questions were answered by the end. There were ...

Hey all, name's Logan (just call me blue 'round here); I'm new. I like to write comical entertainment of nearly any type, and I'm working on a lengthy adventure I'd ...