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Re: The Beautiful B**** Dressed in Black
omg i didn't even realize the david thing!! haha I didn't like "with her green eyes" at first, but it's starting to grow on me, but we shall see. thanks ...
Oct 24, 2007 -
Re: chapter one-revised
Hey Meredith! Much better than from when I first read it so there are just a couple things here and there that can be edited. Quote: “There is no time ...
Oct 24, 2007 -
Re: The Ghost
Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews and adivce! As to the long sentence, I have no idea why it is like that. When I view it on my computer, it's ...
Oct 24, 2007 -
Re: The Beautiful B**** Dressed in Black
Thanks for the helpful advice! I'm glad you like! I did the double spacing before, I thought i did it right the first time but obviously not. Still a newbie ...
Oct 23, 2007 -
Re: The Beautiful B**** Dressed in Black
“The Beautiful Bitch Dressed in Black” Stephen sat on the dirty New York City bus stop. He checked his primly polished Rolex; 12:43 PM. The next bus would be there ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: I Am The Mediterranean Sea
[pre]I am the Mediterranean Sea; peaceful, loving, serene. I let my majestic blue shine for all the world to see. I show my true colors, But keep some treasures hidden ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: The Ghost
It's hard to live in a place where I am unnoticed, Where for me there is no love, No hope, No acknowledgement. I'm just there. Gliding by silently, While no ...
Oct 21, 2007
