TheAlphaBunny

Hola:) Review as requested! My first impression of this was cool. As a writer that likes to attack my readers with unnecessary amounts of description, I've come to really appreciate ...

I have come to clog your already filled schedule. MUAH HAHAHAHAHAHA HA! *cough* Bee hee:3 If you ever get a chance, Jen, would you like to make me a bunny-licious ...

Hilarious. The style is perfect, and the characters are very believable. They totally remind me of people I know!:D I especially loved the "remember" one.^^ Great work! Much loves, Bunny

1. Betwixt by...someone. Bought the book because the cover was cool, read the whole thing because most of the story was cool. And then the last few chapters totally screwed ...

"Go on," my opponent insisted, gesturing to me with his wielded blade. "Make the first move." A soft smile curled my lips as I looked him over: tall, hardened, tired, ...

Edited version! Woo! Um, still having issues with the flow of this piece. It doesn't really matter if you read the old version before this one, since the original isn't ...

(gah, Zeal and Izzy don't like each other very much, do they?) ;) Izzy Deitrich He towered over me, spouting off in Greek and anger rolling off of him in ...

"Slave trader," he had replied in an undertone. He flashed a stained smile, and I felt my lip curl. But really, a slave trader? Laughable. "Where I come from, mister," ...

It's not a must for when I write, but I prefer listing to music to the sound of clicking keys if I'm writing on the computer. I'll listen to all ...

Hee hee feel free to review anything of mine (even my single awful poem^^'). I just saw this topic on my feed, so I thought I'd post a reply for ...

As Zeal rose to take his leave, tossing his cigarette into the ash tray and gathering his things, I felt a strange nagging sensation at the back of my skull. ...

Izzy Deitrich "Children?" I scoffed, arching a brow as he just gazed back disinterestedly at me. "I'm no child you pompous jerk." I shifted my weight to favor my left ...

Izzy Deitrich Looking about the crowded space, I noticed a few--well many, but few notable--strange things. First amidst the arguing and cackling and growling were two dogs. Second, the two ...

(all characters from different stories) Alphonse Harper: No. Maxamilia: What would be the point in living forever while those you love die? Izzy Deitrich: Ask me in a hundred years ...

I looked down at the book now resting on the table between us. "Those of my likes, you say...?" I repeated more to myself as I gazed down. Did he ...