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@JP Now that you point it out, I really didn't "Show don't tell" here. I also think I didn't show any motivation on why this whole battle is occuring. If ...
Jul 17, 2011
@JP Now that you point it out, I really didn't "Show don't tell" here. I also think I didn't show any motivation on why this whole battle is occuring. If ...
Jul 17, 2011
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