The16thHobbit

@JP Now that you point it out, I really didn't "Show don't tell" here. I also think I didn't show any motivation on why this whole battle is occuring. If ...

(( I'm not sure if this should be continued or not, so I am posting this as a short story. Also, when I clicked preview the text came out in ...

This is my first time reviewing... I think you did a good job on the beginning, which metaphorically grabbed me by the throat and made me read the whole chapter. ...

@Masquerade Novels and short stories. I like writing fantasy, as long as there's plenty of adventure involved. I also write an occasional parody, but I don't really consider that song-writing ...

I've tried out those type of forums before. I always have this strange fear of posting the next part of the story too late. There should be a word for ...

A newb wanders through the troll-infested woods of the world wide web. 'Tis a refugee of the fallen kingdoms, whose grand firewalls could not withstand the Raiders of Cheat-Engine. This ...