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ThatAndalite

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: My Life is like a Map

    Interesting song, with quite the emotional meaning behind it. I have nothing harsh to say - and nothing to really improve it, either. Maybe a better rhyme scheme? I dunno. ...

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: 30 Day Writing Challange.

    This is amazing! I'll be sure to complete it sometime, maybe starting now.. on my blog, maybe.. hm. But anyways, everything seems to be in tip-top shape with your grammar/spelling ...

    Jul 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Science, Romantic Re: O' Rapunzel, Where Art Thou?

    Love the chemical symbols in here! It took me a moment, but it made me laugh so hard once I realized what was going on. Overall, wonderful poem. Not that ...

    Jul 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Demon's Game: Arianna

    Hah, thank you! :3 Hell Hospital isn't really the whole game, though (TDG). It's a whole bunch of scenarios. Not just HH! So keep watching, I may add more.

    Jul 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'll be there.

    Beautiful overall. Love it.

    Jul 18, 2015


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