Thane

I like it i thought it was good. and yes hairspray IS very different from pot. lol

(I like rhyming my thoughts I can't put it in words. Don't judge so harsh, everyone has thoughts) (also the rhymes are not forced so if you can't find the ...

It's good but it was a tounge twister for me.

There are two different places, where you're body and spirit find they're faces, both with they're information in separate cases, where they work at they're own paces. Body is amazing ...

Laying on the grass watching the clouds in the sky, watching people grow up and how the days go by. Wondering where am I going to be in 20 years, ...

I love cake I won't deny it, I love cake I always buy it, if you take my cake from me, I'll take a bat and shatter you're knee. Throw ...

I really loved reading this! nice job on the rhymes.

I love zombie stories and this was good!

Hahaha that was halarious.

That was awesome! You cut it straight to the gore. I enjoyed it alot.

Thank you and yes this is my own work. From other people I've learned how to put this in a better way so you can read it easier.

I like it and if this love is really real you should show her this song.

That was AWESOME I wish I could hear it the song.

Very nice! I really like the rhymes you put in. I had to read to over and over so I could get the sound down but overall bravo! :elephant:

The second mind can think both ways, through the difficult nights and days, cutting down the burning sun rays, so your body can sit where it lays. The first mind ...