Thanatos

sorry I haven't posted in a while; school, going to visit family for thanksgiving I haven't had much time to write but I have some of chapter 2. Well here ...

Book of Seals? You mean like those cute blubber animals that perform tricks at Sea World? I'm sorry, but that's what first came to mind and why I checked this ...

I loved this. Mary's personality was clearly shown; you also did great in describing the time period, I especially enjoyed it when she smiled at the executionar and vice versa. ...

Here is the prolouge I came up with. Hate it like it? Tips? Prologue: In the beginning God created heaven and the angels therein. In an attempt to over throw ...

I like it. It could actually go far. A prologue would be kind of nice. It would actually make the story better. Otherwise I love your idea! Keep going 'cause ...

The idea is good and all, but it isn't written in a story format. It just seems like someone's schedule and their remarks. Also you could add a little more ...