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  • Archive Re: Finding Light

    Been looking for a good Storybook! Think I've found one here! Name: Alexander Lymn Nickname/Likes to be called(if any): Xander Age: 17 Sex: Male Looks: Outfit: ^^^ See above Power(if ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Foolish Wisdom

    Hey Everyone! This is my first proper attempt at a rhyming poem, so please tell me what you think of it. It has quite a hidden meaning, but I'm sure ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Monster

    Hey! I loved it! I love how, unlike other monsters, he is scared to scare. It is obviously symbolic (even if you didn't mean it to be, which is very ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: She Stands Alone

    Thanks Amelia, You seem to be a fan of my poems! Haha I never even knew I could write them! Thanks Anyway!

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Vanished, As If You Werent There

    Short and Sweet, I like it, however; we talk together at the airport Does this need to be here? I think just once is fine we walk together at the ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: She Stands Alone

    Just something that came into my head when looking at a picture my friend took. Its not much, but I'd like to see what you all think :D So please ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Girl in the Room (Updated)

    I did write this as soon as I woke up this morning, just came into my head whilst listening to some Rise Against, so be kind and keep in mind ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Archive Re: Godmod Partay~!

    Sounds fun, lets do this: Name: Numosomruearg (Pronounced Jeff) Age: 95476363 years old Gender: It's not really known, he's a floating cheese after all. Personality: Numosomruearg loves shouting at hi

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter One)

    Nice, as TabbyGirl has already mentioned it will be nice to give Hufflepuff some credit, along with a piece of Ravenclaw maybe? No spelling mistakes from what I could see, ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Escape the Dungeon

    Wow, for a 10 year old that's awesome. To be honest it was quite funny and I know that's not what he was aiming for but still. For review purposes ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Trait (Chapter One and Two)

    This was an idea that came to me all of a sudden, at the moment I have Two Chapters done and a third in the making. All the chapters will ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Look for Me

    Excellent, I love it. The suspense is kept all the way through. In my opinion I thought it was an accident that caused something to happen to the person's face, ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The mysterious case of the girl's missing lens.

    Hey Blift, I'm new here on YWS so this review may seem a bit harsh or odd. Haha. Anyway, it's a review none-the-less. Overall I think the story is a ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Exit Path (Game Fan-Fiction)

    For those who haven't played "Exit Path" it's a remarkable game. It has a storyline, of course, but contains essences of deeper meanings. You can play it here: Anyway, after ...

    Jan 23, 2011


Life is like a bag of potatoes, it starts out rough, but can turn into something beautiful (and yummy).
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