Tessitore

Alright, first off, I've always had "issues" (*twitches*) with rhyming poems. I don't know what it is, but it's how I am. With that in mind, here's what I think: ...

I like the Anne Rice books much better when I listen to them. Except the witches. Go away, witches, I dislike you... Anyway, I just recently got into audio books ...

This poem seems crowded. I really like your: one more day bit. It seems really nicely paced. You just need to space a little more, pace a little slower, during ...