Terpsichore

Hi there! The beginning of your piece is a little confusing because I'm not sure if it is past tense, or present tense. Obviously your character is thinking back on ...

Wow. I read the first book in the series and really didn't like it. I'm very open minded when it comes to reading books, I've read Dune by Frank Herbert ...

Crazy! I know which book you're talking about! I read it a long time ago, and when I did a reivew for it for school, the teacher had NO idea ...

Heya there Antigone! I'm here to review your story as requested (but not without pleasure). :) A slight breeze drifted by, rustling the grasses softly. It carried with it the ...

Hi there MAri0O07, I'll be reviewing your story today. :) Everything in bold is what I am commenting on. I throw the freezing cold water on my face, my palms ...

Wow... I shouldn't have seen bits of the other reviews. (First poetry review for me) I have always felt that poetry is a very personal thing and that makes it ...

*waves at Yoda* Sorry if I repeat anything mentioned before, but I try not to read the other reviews before doing one of my own. “Where do you think she ...

Hey there Kara! You've got a promising story here! Things can really go any way! :) A few things here and there that I picked up on, but nothing major! ...

Hey Yoda, This was a good read -- thank you! I could easily imagine the whole thing! Obviously, a few things I found that maybe you could correct? :wink: The ...

I think your characters were good and had a very real element to them. Everybody knows a guy like Shane, the womanizer bad boy that for some reason girls can't ...

Ok... where to begin. I understand that this is a bit of a vent for you, which is great as a blog or a real diary entry. HOWEVER this does ...

Two things I saw that either confused me, or that I think could be corrected. 1. He must. I thought of our conversations. I'm a bit unsure about this one, ...

Well, I'm not sure what to say.. I was frowning the whole time I read this because I had to really focus on when somebody was speaking and when they ...