Terian805

No thank you for reading! Thanks for the tips I'll definitely act on them!

Thanks again for your review! Sorry for the late reply I've slacked off YWS for a while! No this is not the end of the story you can still expect ...

Ok thank you for your points! I'd encourage you to read the first two parts as I am quite proud of them and you'd understand this better.

Thanks for your review Lefty! I'll definitely act on your points!

Thanks for your review and sorry for the late reply! I am considering it a short story because it would probably be to short for a novel! I just thought ...

OK thank you!

OK thanks mate I'll try to act on what you've said!

Hey thanks! I'll definitely try to act on your points! I suppose that this is more of a long short story rather than a chapter! I'll probably change the type ...

Thank you very much for both of your reviews! I have tried to correct the mistakes you pointed out!

Aw thankyou I really appreciate that! I will consider extending even further is that's what you think would be best for it!!

I swear I did the first review! Oh well

Thanks very much for the review! I have corrected the mistakes you pointed out!

Thank you very much for your feedback, it is much appreciated. I have edited the story based on what you have pointed out and I hope it is a bit ...

Thank you all three of you for reading! (Sorry the reply is a bit late!) I will create a revised version soon, and extend the story on Alice's feelings and ...