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Re: Palabras de un disidente
Me encantó! Me parece la idea de este poema como tal. Amo esa idea de ser diferente, de no dejarse llevar por la corriente. Sinceramente, me parece brillante. Amo la ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Swaying Over the Borderline
Wow. I don't even know how to describe this. I loved it so much. I definitely felt it. Like, felt it. There's so much depth in these few lines. While ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Dancing In The Moonlight
I just noticed you wrote a romantic story! This is pretty good.You should write more of these. I'll be glad to review them, since I'm such a fan of romance. ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: The Unknown and the Forbidden
Hi. Quite an intriguing story. I think it lacked of context a bit. Why are they there? I understand it might be intentional, adding a little more mystery into it, ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Never Be Said
This is really great! I tried to find some flaws, but I found nothing. It is completely astounding. I hope you do continue it, because I feel it's a bit ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: By the Red Fence (Prolouge)
Hey! So, I found this really good. The way you put words is pretty special. Something I really love is the way Ian's feelings can be perceived by anyone reading ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Fly
So, I really liked this story. It has a flow that makes it deep and original. I love the way you describe the characters, and give it a special way ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Falling Slowly
This story is great. It truly is. I thought it would be the typical hate to love kind of story, but it wasn't. It almost made me cry. I loved ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: The Dark In A Man
Hey. So I usually don't love action stories, but this one really caught my attention. I like it. It's pretty captivating. I felt like somehow, I needed to know more. ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Dance
I loved it! I'm a dancer and it truly made me think about how much I love dancing. It transmits the magic that happens when dance and love get together. ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Leaves
Hey Jalmoc! That was really good! You should definitely write more love stories! I loved that one and could definitely feel the love between the characters. The only thing that ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Don't Ask.
Oh My God! this is really good! I love it because its not the typical love story, it is wonderful! Also, I liked it because it has more to it ...
Sep 17, 2011
