Tenyo

Hey Megsug! Apologies for the delay. Lots of positives this week. Dialogue "Of course, nobles don't like hearing what they need to hear, so he was kicked out of the ...

Hey Megsug! I fear that if you keep writing things like this then I won't have much to talk about in my reviews. He had no doubts that everything would ...

I'm baaack~ Page ten Love is in the air~ So, what I really love about this part is the attention to detail. Particularly the part where Christian is twisting the ...

Part eight Hah! Ronin and Finn, I love them so much! They're hilarious, I hope they stick around to become part of the plot. Also I'm starting to wonder if ...

Page six! Not much going on here, but I still enjoy the sense of wonder as they're getting closer into the park. 'It seemed' is a tiny phrase that when ...

Part 5! Or page 5... or chapter 5? Who knows. Introspection I really, really like the first half of this. It's another glimpse into the minds of these two characters- ...

Part four! Ah, the joy of things that are casually magical- although until I see this park for myself I'm not entirely convinced that it isn't just one of Conrad's ...

Hey Blue! I'm here to plague your novel =] Page One I haven't read enough to fully understand where the 'page one, page two, page three' structure comes from, but ...

Hey Calenwric! Happy Review day. First for a positive What I really, really like about this is the attention to the physical. That one sided hug and the "Her rosy ...

Hey EmeraldEyes! Interesting essay you have here Brackets I think that when you [do this] you mean that this is where the source of the quote comes from? But then ...

Hey Tulip! Loneliness and abandonment I like the set-up you have here, of this kid who has never really been a part of a loving environment before and there is ...

Hey Strange! Where do I start... The comma A comma is used in a few different ways. Generally its purpose is to link two clauses together, to break up a ...

Hey AndyNoticeMe! Style What I love here is how much it reads like a diary. I feel like I've just stumbled upon some secret journal and glanced into the typical ...

Solemn Grundy born on Monday christened on Tuesday married on Wednesday... Hey Zlyf! Forewords So, you know how some people are grammar freaks? I'm a page freak, and I pay ...

Hey RedRozeNinja! Nice name by the way. This is a big piece and so is going to need a big review. I'll start this on a positive. Scatterbrain, scatterbrain It ...