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Re: I'm Back with Some Ridiculously Cute Couples
I find it quite easy to tell that they're the same two couples, so if that's a previous weakness of yours then it's not at all evident here. I much ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: Fight scenes
If you're nearly finished then just go for it! The buzz you get when you finally wrap the tape around the first draft is amazing. Just keep ploughing through it. ...
Jul 20, 2013 -
Re: Digital Art - Angelique
Maybe it's a stylistic preference, but I think you could do with a lot less texturing on the hair. I know you put a lot of time and effort into ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Agent or Publisher?
Just out of curiosity, which would you guys prefer to do when you get published and why? Do you have any opinions on which is the *best* way? Self publishing ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Kids are often the hero
Ahah, this is where Hiyao Miyazaki's endless wisdom comes into it. The big word he uses is nostalgia . Have you ever noticed how so much more adults read children's ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: A new story.
The Snowflake method is great, isn't it. This is looking really good! I have to agree with Anadir though. Gripping plots tend to rise and fall, you need more happy ...
Jul 11, 2013 -
Re: ~Black~ Reviews.
Awesome review! It's much appreciated.
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: ~Black~ Reviews.
This is rated [16+] for swearing, so feel free to refuse. Honest opinions on the theme, language and tone of it would be great! And anything else. I'll return the ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Speeding up my Plot
Rosie has pretty much hit every nail on the head. I have the same problem as you though, I get so excited and write everything in such a short space. ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: new here
Welcome to YWS! Unfortunately I don't have Tumblr >.< But if you post your work on the forums and send me a link I'd be more than happy to review. ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Good and Bad
(This has been gathering dust for a while so I figured I should make use of it.) Some people like to create pages and pages of character sheets, and still ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Ze Present Tense
You're welcome! I had to get round to thinking about this stuff anyway because I'm embarking on my first present tense novel and this is dangerously unknown territory. I was ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: PRISM and the NSA
So... What if one day I became a freedom fighter and the government digs up that research I did for my novel on creating a bio-weapon for my post-apocalyptic world ...
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: Insert Coin [2]
Out comes the lint monster that has been waiting to devour you in revenge for all the junk you keep dumping on top of it. *Inserts superglue*
Jul 3, 2013 -
Re: June Review Day Review
1051 reviews between 144 people is epic! You guys are awesome ^__^
Jul 3, 2013
