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First thought; Arthur Miller (most famously known for A View From the Bridge) wrote another play called After the Fall. A lot of things share titles though, I wouldn't worry ...

6/10 I feel like there's more to this story and the pitch doesn't really do it justice. It seems vague and creates a lot of mystery without the original hook. ...

#3 Blankets Shapes of you escape, unafraid, drifting in bubbles through the air, while snowflakes kiss your neck and nestle into your pillow. Original; Shapes of you escape, unafraid, drifting ...

Hi Nafa! I've made notes on about a third so far, let me know if you've got any thoughts/questions.

There's a quality in your poetry that makes it always feel like there's some deep backstory seeping out from the corners and in between the lines. I really like it.

My weirdest stories were the ones I wrote as a kid, not because they were particularly weird (most were full of classic sci-fi/horror/space opera tropes), but because my characters were ...

Tagfest! @Apricity @ChildOfNowhere @ChiravianSkies @Enderflash @Falconer @Fortis @Jumpingsheep @Hexglass @Nikayla @Regismare @SpiritedWolfe @TheSilverFox @Ventomology You can do it guys! Remember, eve

I have a few tricks for working with people with social anxieties. Appreciate them, and yourself. Wanting to make friends because you like to make friends is a good start. ...

Anytime ^__^

Apricity wrote an article/thread on prologues here . Rosendorn's advice on what counts as a prologue might be of particular use. I wouldn't say get rid of the text itself ...

Hi Maxgaan, welcome to YWS! If you want detailed critique or feedback you can post in the literary forums via the Publishing Centre, (link up top.) This is well formatted, ...

In a literary piece I'd recommend using the quote command. Highlight the paragraph you want to quote and copy and paste it into the comments box. Then put quote at ...

The way I normally would to it is to click Full Reply , then in the full reply box you can scroll down to other peoples posts. On their post, ...

Having read a few snippets of your work over time, I don't think you're at much of a loss as far as quality is concerned, your writing is really good. ...

I don't really have time to take on a co-writing project at the moment, but I could recommend Angela's Ashes by Frank McCourt as a famous work of reference that ...