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That's fair enough. Lightsong's advice is pretty sound. If you're aiming to keep it light and focus on the MC's strengths then I would say the Harry Potter universe is ...

I'd recommend watching some of the later episodes of SAS: Who Dares Wins . It's a Tv program where they put a group of men through SAS training, and in ...

Hii guys! I'm doing some worldbuilding en masse for a bunch of locations and characters. I want to brainstorm and have them exist to add flavour to the story and ...

Granted! You turn into a sentient helium balloon. I wish my flatmate would get off his butt and do some tidying.

Vampire, so I can wear a cape and hiss at the sun =D Would you rather be assigned as a random character (not of your choice) from a British Rom-com ...

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I want to be the very best, like no-one ever was.

Both. I stay up until about 2am, wake up at about half five, then nap through half of the afternoon.

G'dafternoon wonderful YWSers. I need some help with endings. I just can't do them >.< I think the problem I have is I get too enthusiastic about *everything* so when ...

The best advice I've been given on this topic is exactly what Holysocks said. Try it out on younger audiences. Their culture is built differently to ours in that most ...

I think that title could appeal to a niche audience depending on which genre you put it in, probably some kind of mystery genre fiction, either crime or romantic. The ...

Huh? Oh, I didn't really review your entire story. If I did I would have had many more positive things to squish in there =] I just figured that to ...

Hi AneiDoru So... I went through the liberty of glancing over some of The Light Maiden's Mark and picked out a few examples of where I might be able to ...

Do it =D I adore journal style stories. I love the whimsicality and disorder that the format allows because it means you can see the constant writing and rewriting of ...

Hey MrPhox! I love the concept of this, it sounds really fun. My only advice is to make sure you take your 16-year-old seriously, and remember to avoid falling into ...