Tenyo

I prefer animation, but Pan's Labyrinth has to be my favourite fantasy film. Have you ever had a crush on a book or cartoon character?

Unborn The world I will be born into is gonna be an awesome one. The knives will be melted, the bullets will be burned, The bombs will be sent into ...

Sure, he ran away to take refuge anywhere except the front line, but just as soon as he got there the front line... disappeared? He looked around. Whoever was standing ...

Name: Jose Moreno Age: 17 Picture: No picture. Let's combine Antonio Banderes with Orlando Bloom, chop of a few decades, with longer hair and a darker skin. Vehicle: An old ...

I'm impressed! Especially since I didn't actually realise you didn't use the word 'the.' You managed it seamlessly. My only issue is that the dialogue in this is a little ...

I love the title, I can't remember what the exact word for it is, but the contrast between tears and fire makes it interesting. The beginning hooked me right away, ...

You gots mno reviews :( Talk about epic proportions, one person dies and the world ends? The end of the world is a little cliche, but the idea of the ...

This is amazing. Historical fiction can be a bore to people outside the genre, but this kept me reading all the way through. It seems most of the little things ...

Hey! I'm particularly aiming to improve general readability, or rather, getting rid of those things that 'jar when you're reading them,' so could you critique this for me? It's a ...

I want a harsh review! Title: Mullings of a Failed Musician Link: Let me know if you want any particular review or points in return :)

I'll give you points in return for a review :) It's called 'Mullings of a Failed Musician.'

*Jackie* He'd been watching for a while before he realised something was wrong. After staring through the binoculars again he saw the size of the fin that was rocking their ...

Peri dropped down to the floor. 'Easy!' He grinned triumphantly, but only for a moment before someone yelled and he ducked to dodge the other arm which came swinging right ...

Aww, so sweet. The 'Woah' thing is a little annoying, especially since it seems to be used as a form of expression, it just seems like these lyrics are brilliant ...

Wow... It seems like there's something quite fragile behind this. I'm not sure what the numerals are for, but they're odd and out of place. The structure seems a little ...