Tenyo

Review Part(7) Peuuuuwwwschooookchapoo!

Reviews for novels and novellas! Because it's much more fun. I'll give chapter by chapter reviews on any Novel / Novella, finished or not. Any genre, any length. My reviews ...

Are you getting bored of my reviews yet? I'm loving this story, so I'll keep reviewing anyway :D The second part of this was really well written. It still seems ...

Review Part (5.2) "My hands wipe my pants." I think I may have mentioned this point before, but if not, this should be "I wipe my pants" or "I wipe ...

Review (5) Yey, twist! I found this chapter didn't really have much of a setting to it, you mostly described the characters. For that reason it was kind of hard ...

Review Part(4) I'm impressed :) You're really only fifteen. Again, the overload of unneccesary speech which makes it almost scriptlike. I'm warming up to the style though. Suddenly the phrase ...

Awesome! Compared to chapter two this is brilliant. There's still quite a lot of speech overall, but with the extra descriptions here and there it all flows quite smoothly. This ...

Review Part(2) Wait... What? In the last chapter you got to the point of Colin. This girl was talking about Colin who had moved away, appeared to be getting stressed ...

Hey Nike! I'm here to review your novel :) There's something quite refreshing about your style of writing. It's different to most drone-like styles. The only problem is that it's ...

Hey Wing. I like the piece in general, the general emotion and language used is really good. There's just a few things that drag it down. First; Silky Locks, raven ...

I don’t know which was harder, trying to keep up with a life and a child, or trying to pretend nothing had changed. I cancelled all my social plans over ...

Hey Kingolions :) This poem is sweet. It's calming, and the imagery you've used is beautiful. At first I thought it looked a bit too short, but after reading it ...

Dante... *Shivers.* I'm slightly scared of writing anything negetive in this review XD This whole poem is very dark, and yes, very twisted. For some reason that I can't really ...

Awesome! Hey Aliza :D It needs work. The scenes are a little too jumpy, and there's a lot of speech in here. On the other hand, I'm getting a pretty ...

Review [0.05] This, I certainly like. Isabelle seems to really come to life here, and again I'm interested in this girl, how she became like this, and how she'll work ...