Tenyo

Review number five! I like Darius :D I'm not entirely sure why, I think perhaps because his casual pessimism makes him quite amusing. I especially love how you've described his ...

And again we have returned to that brilliant standard of writing. Emily is a great character in that she is just as unique and vivid as all the others. I ...

Uh-ohh. I'm afraid this won't be a particularly nice review. One of the problems you face being a talented writer, is high expectations. When your work drops down to standard, ...

Ohh this is so cool! Okay, first of all- more things I like about this. In such a short space of time you've created characters that are so vivid. It ...

Ohh, so part (0) was the prologue. I like how you've linked these two parts together by the subtle mention of Vara. As said previously, your style of writing is ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your novel :D To start, I honesty wasn't expecting this piece to be as good as I found it. It's brilliantly written, it has ...

As you’ve probably noticed, I didn’t like Henri. In fact I hated having her around. I didn’t actually notice it at first because I was too busy feeling sorry for ...

How do I review this... I can't really find much to comment on, again, so I apologise for not being very helpful. I guess this means I'll have to start ...

Haha! I like this a lot :D At first I was thinking this story was a little too preachy. As I continued reading though I found it quite refreshing. Because ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your novel :D As a first chapter this isn't particularly gripping, but it did draw me in. I quite like the characters, there's quite ...

(Note for those who haven't read the other chapters (Click the 'View novel' button); I am Leon. When I mention the name Leon I'm refering to myself in third person, ...

Jackie - Black Mages - 11.00pm 'Excuse me.' The cleaner said. She peeped her head out the kitchen door. Her cheeks where red from effort, and by now she had ...

I like it :) A lot of the work I read these days tends to be over-passionate and filled with long words stuffed between poorly written sentences. This was quite ...

Review three! I like this chapter, but the events didn't really seem to flow together all that well. So far one of the interesting things about your writing is those ...

Awesome! :D The hook was instant, and the opening created a brilliantly sinister atmosphere. As a first chapter it works really well, and the plot is quite gripping. I understood ...