Tenyo

Name: Hat Gender: Male Age: 16 Personality: Hopelessly pessimistic. He can boarder on amusing in his illogically negative conclusions. He lacks the inhibitions of physical contact, and so will stand ...

Flying. Without a doubt. Would you rather be a famous, top selling author for writing a twelve book series called Harry Twilight and the seven shiny wizards, -or- Be the ...

Grammar for Dummies! I know the Dummies books have already been mentioned, but this was/is a huge help to me. It taught me all the basics of how words slot ...

In defence of Authonomy: it's one of those things that works in theory. I joined the proto-site before it was opened to the general public, and it was awesome. People ...

Lost and Found Chapter Seven: I found myself wandering through the streets with no direction. Henri had mentioned ‘grace’ before. It’s what you say when you sit down at dinner, ...

This chapter is quite well written, but Olivia's character is off, and a few of the details. She killed a girl. She took a gun, tied her to a chair, ...

I don't know if this counts, but I'm going to mention Banksy (graffitti revolutionist,) because he's awesome. On the back cover: ' 'There's no way you're going to get a ...

Wow. Olivia is remarkably bitter, though I guess that makes her perspective more interesting. It also has a lot more of a spark to it, which is an improvement from ...

And we finish on a brilliant chapter that I find little to critique on. As a whole, so far, this story has its flaws, but that's something you can improve ...

I like the introduction for these next two characters. Even though Asha is only aware of their voices, the way they speak and the things they say do well to ...

Um... I'm not really sure what to make of this chapter. I read it a few days ago, read it today, and re-read it slowly, but there's quite a lot ...

I apologise for skipping the reviews of chapter three and part one of chapter for, because I didn't want to repeat myself. I'll commend you for the story, it is ...

I think this is better than the previous chapters, but there is still much work to be done. I'd say that's mainly on the characters. There are a Lot of ...

As with the prologue, this first chapter seems to be lacking. Amanda is horrible, which means a lot of people wouldn't want her around, and it would seem reasonable that ...

That's a lot of reviews you have already... But, as requested; As a prologue, I'd say this isn't really suitable, to be honest. A prologue needs to give your reader ...