Tenyo

Review part two! This chapter seems to be a contrast to chapter one. There are several characters introduced at once, and a lot of names mentioned, which makes it harder ...

Hey dude, sorry this took so long to get round to. As an opening chapter this is brilliant. I really liked the way you've introduced the wolf first. Usually a ...

Umm... I'm sorry :p I'm about to go against a lot here, and say something that's probably a little harsh. I liked the poem the way it was before (and ...

-Dima- He turned the corner, and swiftly turned back. It was one thing to kick someone when they're down, but to paralyse them first? He secured his parchment in one ...

Bleh I posted a minute too late. Okay, editing...

-Hat- As they carried on walking, taking several sneaking glances at 'Kima-Zahra.' Ignoring this odd predicament? Easier for her. They continued walking, one light up ahead, the other following wherev

-Hat- He had been angry with Zahra for a moment, after all he was just trying to help. Then again, she was making a basket just for something to do. ...

In day, the people in the street carry their shoulders weighed by burdens. And their eyes- so condemning- restrict us to the evening shadows, away from the daylight that binds ...

Liar! This IS something amazing! I love this poem. People need uplifting every day, and with the mass of emoness that dominates poetry, this stands out a mile. I really ...

Name: Dima Sidorov Character theme: I'm still here- Jonny Rzeznak Allegience: Normal Age: 16 Bloodline: Half-blood Appearance: When measured up he is average height, but his straight posture adds a ...

-Hat- Hat sighed and looked around. He caught sight of a girl sitting by a tree, weaving a basket? The task seemed as pointless as his cart of metal. The ...

Don't do iiit! Just to be a party pooper, and throw in a serious note for anyone who will actually try something like this. I did 200k for nano, which ...

The new profiles look awesome! :D

Hey Em! Kima absorbs energy, Hat makes little balls of light, light counts as energy so do you reckon they could co-operate to boost her power? -Hat- He checked the ...

(Starting with Emzie's permission) - Hat - He had been walking round for hours, followed by the rattle and clang of the scrap metal in the cart behind him. His ...