Tenyo

Just to spoil the fun, I've been a performer XD So singing and dancing on stage isn't so bad. I would definately choose that since those hundreds of people would ...

I love it! I'm naturally overly critical, but I read this from beginning to end without at all thinking 'don't do this' or 'that's wrong.' I loved the voice of ...

Hey Emmy! This is sweet, I kind of like the way the thoughts seem to be piled together with little structure. At first I was a little unsure of it, ...

Most definately I would rather kiss the tarantula. If I stood in a box full of frogs I would be scared of stepping on one and hurting it. Would you ...

Starting? I disagree! And agree! It's really tempting to start. On one hand, after a week there might be too many posts to keep track of, which would make it ...

Is there room for me? :D

I'm back in the storybooking business! Name: Amara Rayner Age: 13 Gender: Female Looks: She's short and slight, with bright green (neon) hair in fluffy spikes, green eyes and fair ...

Chapter Four: I dislike romances, they bug me, especially teenage romances. I will admit once, and only once (even if it's in writing) that I genuinely like this one. So, ...

Chapter Two: Ok is not okay (I had to research that one a little.) Abbreviations are dodgy little things to use. Half of the time we don't even realise we're ...

Coconut jelly babies? eww. Orange jelly babies are obviously the best. Red jelly babies are just white jelly babies that got really embarrased because the orange beat them so badly ...

One of the things I love about the writing world is that teens don't really exist. You're either a writer, or a young writer. Sometimes it's best to throw yourself ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your novel, starting here with the prologue. I found this really, really hard to read, in all honesty. There's a few things that need ...

I lift my hat to any thirteen year old who can write eighteen thousand words. When I was thirteen I was still writing meloncholy poems and four hundred word heavily ...

Crimson - that sounds hilarious from a third person perspective XD What's the craziest thing I've ever done in the name of research? I can't say I've ever stuffed myself ...

I'm guessing you mean traits that will make an annoying character, not just one that will make your story annoying to read. I find the best way to do this ...