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Ello again! So, where to start? Viewpoints from a point of view Changing viewpoint can be very disruptive - imagine suddenly switching from a grown adult to that of a ...

Hey Pointe! I'm here to plague- I mean, review, your novel. Positives To start, there are parts in this I really like. "I could feel my face grow red ... ...

Is this actually a schollarship essay? For what? In all honesty this has "I'm a writer" scorched across it in big yellow letters. I'm not sure if that was your ...

Hey Sura! Turtle vomit? Haha. I will say simply that yes, these do seem like a collection of random thoughts, and I think if you were to try to combine ...

(Quick summary: When Henri first came into my care I had a lot to learn, but slowly we were getting the hang of things. When I got called into her ...

Name : Rex Verde Rank/Roll : Chief Mechanic Age : 24 Gender : Male Character Quote : Yes sir! Theme-song : (Working on it) Appearance : He’s slightly on the ...

Hey Milk! So I'm the first person to review the first chapter of your novel, I feel privilaged! So, presentation, presentation. This is really long. Long posts tend to scare ...

(Quick summary; up until now I've been trying to pretend that my life is still as perfect as it used to be, instead of the mess it has become since ...

It's a shame this is so short. You say you're new to the craft of writing but in that one stanza you've proven that you have it in you to ...

Hey cheese! Fascinating use of imagery, htouhg I'm not sure if it's in a positive way... I agree with Paladin, undressing with great velocity is strange, if not humerous. I ...

Aww :( This is sad. I don't think the poem is too long, so if it's longer than usual I think you should stick with this length. I felt both ...

Hey Story! I like this poem. I think as a writer of poetry you've still got a fair bit to learn, but that's why this site is so great! Some ...

Once again I find myself in awe at your work :) I tend to feel intimidated whenever I come to review something of yours because I know I won't be ...

Cute, short, and sweet. Perhaps a little too much of each. I do like this poem, but it lacks a lot in substance. I think it would be better if ...

Wow... That's quite a grand poem. Some of the concepts are strange, and I don't really know what half of those words mean so I can't really offer much help ...