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Re: My brain is pouring out of my ears right now!!!
Haha, aww. This illness of which you speak unfortunately has no cure, and a name that you must only whisper, because that's all it takes to pass it on to ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Don't feel obligated, this is a big project, but if you get any spare time to read it... It's mainly the later chapters that I need reviews on.
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Dead Asleep *Invite Only*
Name: Eve Whistle Age: 27 Dead for: Two weeks Profession: Actor Appearance: She's mid-height, with blond hair and dark eyes. She wears loose clothing, usually sportswear, and always the same ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Time Breakers *Permission Only* (Started~Full)
Name: Lucas Math Age: 21 Gender: Male Appearance: He's mid-height, pale, and skinny. He wears large round glasses with goggles over his head, and is more likely to be found ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Dead Asleep *Invite Only*
Credit to this goes to LastPaladin. The concept: Everybody is already dead. (If you’ve ever seen Dead Like Me it’s a bit like that.) Our appearances change, so that those ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: YWS... The Musical!
*Throws hat in and pulls out old dancing shoes.*
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: The Guardians of the Jrakkon Stone (Chapter 1)
Hey Armstronge! This is a very, very long chapter, and consists mostly of speech. Not only does that make it more difficult to read, but it's hard to keep track ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Lost&Found: Chapter 15: Camoflage
(Oh no! Where's chapter fourteen? Back on the drawing board, it seems. It's not crucial to the plot yet, so I'm leaving it there for a while.) (The story so ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Thirty one days
I'm posting my stuff here, if anybody is interested.
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Thirty one days
Challenge One: Thirty-one days, thirty-one characters You have to make up a character per day. Give them as much detail as you would in an SB profile. Challenge Two: Thirty-one ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Freezing Downtown!
One of the most important jobs of an artist is to make the work look easy and effortless, as if the perfect scene just re-arranged itself. The trouble with these ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Love Will Find You
The last line: I'm not sure how other readers will take this, but I think the last line is a bit too hangy. It seems to be a poem of ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Lost&Found: Chapter thirteen: Esper
(Quick Summary so far: After months of struggling with Henri, my five-year old cousin who ended up in my care, I came to admit that parenting was not a solo ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Location Unknown: Second Wind (Begins 4th of December)
Rex : Engine Room Five : Zeus He could hear people around chattering, though he never engaged. He had always preferred his solidarity, it was familiar to him. ‘He’s a ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: The Tales of Alexandria Hamilton Chapter One
Hey Charlotte! I'm here to raid your portfolio. Maybe critique your novel while I'm here :) First things first! Should you write more? Of course! One of the most crucial ...
Dec 11, 2010
