Tenyo

After many, many poses and peculiar grins I realised the one in which I look least awkward is the one I took while playing with the settings, so I'm putting ...

Overkilll.jpg So, I heard security is getting tigher these days.

Hey Mystic! I really like this! I'm probably not as much of a dedicated fan of Supernatural as other members on this site, but I enjoyed it none the less. ...

Hey Perse! This is really good! The text itself is well written and explained, and looks good on the page. You've also presented some really interesting views. First, a tiny ...

Hey Ace! First off, this is loong, you might want to cut down the length. Big pieces are difficult to read all the way through, and getting ywsers to review ...

Hey Kafk! I like this poem in its simplicity. You've taken a very basic thought and laid it on the page without all the extra frills. I think maybe it's ...

Hey Drax! I haven't read the rest of the novel, so I'm basing this review on the single chapter alone. If you can't explain it simply... You don't understand it ...

Ah, it was this dream again. Eve looked about the empty space around her. She'd had the same dream every day for two weeks. Every night she drifted off to ...

Sushi! Hammer time. To start; the art of sentences. Every sentence must portray a complete thought (let's ignore those strange 'techniques' they teach you in primary school.) Every verb needs ...

Hey lacy! This is short but sweet, it has quite a fairytalish quality to it. A few things to pick on though. Names You use names a lot, in the ...

Hey msgold! Like most lyrics, this probably sounds much better with the music. The way I put it though is that music is words that have sound to go with ...

Hey Lauren! You haven't written any reviews, but this looks important so I'll glance over it. The idea of the Influence question is to see what kind of people you ...

This is a really interesting short story, I like how it turned out in the end, the way it mimics the beginning. I'll avoid nit-picking because I think there is ...

Hey Tom >.> Interesting story - pretty weird. So, characters: In the beginning you tell too many basics about Tom's appearance. What you need is something that stands out. Hazlenut ...

I'm impressed with what you've done with this! So I'm afraid I can't offer too much critisism. If anything, I would say tweak it a bit to help it flow ...