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Chapter One: The Bumble Bee Kite Updated: Febuary 12th It was the Bumble-Bee kite that started it all- though at the time I would have blamed Kara for being so ...

Happy Review Day! Ah, the boulder contest :D I like this piece, though it's sad, you've done really well in capturing the emotions of an inanimate object. The main thing ...

RIght, I'll be brief with this review. I would say this piece is a bit fast, but I con't want to go into it before reading the other half of ...

Wow, so that's the deal with the knife... I'm not sure what to make of this. I get it, teenager angst and all that, but isn't that a bit of ...

Review Part 6... I think. Ugh, that guy is a jerk - .- But if your intention was to make him dislikable, then you did it well. I like the ...

I like this :) I don't know who Matteo is yet, but I like his perspective. Even though it's short this is an interesting piece, and it tells a lot ...

Review Part Three: Another good piece. There wasn't really much going on, and not much dialogue, but you pulled it off well. It does seem a little strange that her ...

Review Part Two Again, I like this. Something about the way it is written is really interesting to read, though this chapter didn't have as much of a hook as ...

Hey Truth! Happy Review Day! I'm here to wreak havoc on your novel, starting with chapter one. I must say that after trawling through piles of cliche's this is quite ...

Review Part Five. Hazel seems a bit too well-adjusted for a girl who's spent her life locked up on her own. I can understand that reading her books gives her ...

Hiiya! Why are there two chapter three's? What I said in the last review about spending more time inside a characters head, this is exactly what I meant. You've captured ...

Review part three. Now you have my interest :) The introduction and mystery of Adalyn has sparked things up a little. The problem I found here though is that Adalyn ...

Ello again. I had to read your comment about how Hazel is actually the princess from the prologue in order to piece the two together. It occured to me, but ...

Hey Saku! Happy Review Day! I've never been able to work out what a prologue is all about. Some writers put them as kind of an introduction to their story, ...