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Tenyo

  • Fantasy Novels Re: Blackened Runes - Prologue

    Hey Noir! I'm here to plague your novel! I say plague, but the first thing I will comment on is that this is an excellent prologue! It was instantly gripping ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Novels and Novellas

    Hey, I'm back in business! Any requests?

    Apr 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 结束

    Hey AM! I think best thing about this piece is that you have briefly mentioned how other people seem to be handling the end of the world, but most of ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled. (Plz review)

    (Not got a title yet) I ask you now to leave yourself impartial to this story, because it is amazingly sad, and should be taken with utmost sincere seriosity. That ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    Kaeru: When we were kids on the hottest days in summer we would cook eggs and togage using the pannels on the roof as hot-plates. It wasn't the tastiest meal, ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: Yeh... Well...

    I'm gonna write a series of novels, they'll be so good they'll burn a hole straight through the slush pile. I'm going to get them published under a secret pen ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    (Ohh, this is a chance for my to play with a relatively new character.) Pietro: If anyone were to hurt my little brother, I would go to all four corners ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: My You

    Hey Crest! It's been a while since I've reviewed, so I may be a little rusty. First things first: Presentation. Poems/Lyrics need to look good, and be easy to read. ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Novel Workshop Re: Advanced Critiques Questions

    *Raises Hand* So, now that we've discovered how awesome WriterFeedPad is, I was wonderinf if instead of uploading a document, one could post a link to a WFP instead. It ...

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    Juliet: Kitty's Diary... Hey, don't look at me like that! She reads my mind, it makes us even. Mew: Kitty's Diary. It's only fair, after all. Howl: War of Eons ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    Rusty: None, I'm a vegetarian. Juliet: No he's not, he's a liar. He just eats junk food all the time and has no idea what real steak is. Rusty: Says ...

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    Rusty: A new motor propeller that can push my pedalbike up to 120mph, that's pretty sweet ;) Kaeru: Those cookie things with the chocolate and sprinkles that Kitty makes. Question: ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Religion causes more problems than it solves

    I think religion does more good than bad. There are environments like war zones and unstable or poor countries that most people won't dare to enter. I've seen many religions ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: Post-Novel-Depression

    I recently finished my own novel, and I found that there is still much joy in it. It's kind of like being able to relive a memory. The story is ...

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: What would your characters do?

    Ping- seeing the lack of question, would write his own impossible and pardoxel question to confound the next person in the thread. Ceros - Would then erase the question for ...

    Feb 9, 2011


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening