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Hey Qara! I agree with Demoness, the imagery in this piece is wonderful! The only issue I had was that there was a bit too much abstract. I kind of ...

Hey Scar! This is awesome! It's brilliantly creative and beautifully simple. I love the personification of the lion. Especially a vegan lion, I imagine it to be a hard character ...

[I name this Part #1 because I've yet to decide on where chapter breaks go, however it's a long novel, so I apologise to anyone who clicks thinking this is ...

Hey Hermione137. This is a good start. You've captured my interest in this character despite such a quiet opening, which is good. I can see what your intention is and ...

Hey Hermione137. This is a good start. You've captured my interest in this character despite such a quiet opening, which is good. I can see what your intention is and ...

Name: Sam Taylor Age: 26 Appearance: A typical roughneck. His hair is dark blond and he hasn’t had a shave in far too long. He’s muscular with a golden tan, ...

Hey Techo! I'm afraid I haven't read the previous chapters, so I can't say much about the plot right now. First the Council of the Elders: This is chapter three, ...

Ah, Jemjive, hello! I agree with Skorpe, I love the metaphor and imagery in this. If I must pick at something though I have to say that where the first ...

Hey tigershark! At first I did like this poem. I think you've done a rally good job of expressing the emotion in it. The problem I had though is that ...

Hey there Perse! There were things in this that didn't make sense much to me, I think it might be due to some poetic habits of yours. For example, in ...

This show would put Gladiators and even Ninja Warrior to shame. Each contestant must pass three rounds before going on to the last. Climbing through trees, battling high current waters, ...

Right now you have all the time in the world to do whatever you want. Be creative, write whatever you want to, and enjoy the process. Start weaving your new ...

Ello again. Not to give a fluffy review, but I love this story so far. It's tense, emotional, and gripping. About your writing in general, I really like your descriptions, ...

Hey Skins! To be brief, this is a great introduction for Zoey. Like your other characters she quite vivid, and stands apart well as her own identity, especially compared to ...

Hey there Butterfinger! This is an interesting piece, and I agree that it has much potential. The whole scene is well thought up and you've done well getting into your ...