Tenyo

Hey Sarah Hurray for the demolition of That Which Must Not be Named (that you mentioned in the spoiler.) This piece made me smile. I agree with the others, it ...

Hey Metal! What struck me most about this piece was that there are a lot of contradictions. Like the smell of some thing rotting, and of something sweet. A capturer ...

Chapter One: The Man Who Came Back There were never enough hands, and there was never enough time. The soldiers came in waves and were split into groups - those ...

You mean some people *don't* write every day? :O What do they do with their time?

Greetings! Interesting piece of work. I like the amount of emotion and thought in it - you give a very intricate view of your characters perspective. At some points it ...

I agree with the former review, this is a wonderful poem. One of the hardest things to do is so calmly reflect on things of the past, especially those that ...

Greetings! First note: I like your signature, especially noticing it after reading lyrics. The Lyrics are good. I know it's always hard to read/review them without an idea of the ...

Previous Chapter: First Chapter: Part #4 ‘I hear Knight are on the move again,’ Vast said. ‘Whispers in the underground.’ His tone was flat when he said it, and I ...

Part #1 - Part #2 - Part #3 The shop that I was to work in over the next few weeks was a terraced building. The view from outside the ...

This is adorable! It's a very, very short story, but I think that works. My main suggestion would be to push all those questions at the top into one paragraph, ...

Hey Evi! Could you possibly review this for me? =D It's chapter two of my novel "Kaeru."

Click here for Kaeru: Part #1 The wind blew, and the sun shone. His face was like a map of a land that no longer exists - battered and creased ...

Ooh, interesting characters! I love them! They're both so radically different and at the same time they both seem to have that air of danger around them that makes them ...

Hey AngelKnight! (I like that name by the way.) This is a really cute piece! I haven't read the other chapters but by the end of this one I still ...

Hey Noelle The thing I like most about this piece is the dynamics between the characters introduced. They seem like the kind of group everybody would want to be friends ...