Tenyo

I agree with Jabber about organisation. For something this complex it's very easy to get lost and tangled up inside the plot, especially when you have a lot of ideas ...

I would feel obliged to not officially participate :p But I'll gladly join in just for getting the words down and help with any organisation. Time zones would be awkward, ...

Oh wow, I had forgotten about this. Okay! January 2012, 1 Plot / 1 Character per day. I'm up for it. Anyone else?

Hey tigershark! First suggestion: I would recommend breaking this into two shorter chapters rather than having a tail of dots in the middle. If it was a particularly long chapter ...

Quicktip: This work is reaally long, which means people aren't going to be overly keen on reviewing it. If you want to attract reviewers you should post it in three ...

Thanks for the hard work Nate, you're awesome!

Ello again! Whosi whatsi's It might be worth me mentioning now that character names are a good thing to have. Keep them simple and memorable. Remember that whenever you use ...

Ello again. I'm going to nitpick my way through this one. "gun, pointing to the // witch and he quickly trigged it. " < I don't know what this is ...

Great opening! I thought I wouldn't enjoy it because it's quite simple, but I really did. You set the scene quickly and gave just enough information to do so. It's ...

This is the temporary cover for my novel "The Place Where Good Men Die." Feedback welcome :) cover with title2.jpg

Chapter One: The Man Who Came Back {Part One} {Part Three} Those who didn’t seem to understand what was going on did the same thing as me. They stood back ...

Interesting point of view! I find the problem is that most people don't realise why their characters are mary-sues, and like you said, they've put a lot of effort in ...

I got this idea from DA and wondered how it would be applied to writing. The discussion was regarding Nude Art, and where you draw the line between art and ...

Hey Reason! (Pre-warning, I don't usually review poetry.) In whole I like this. The language is beautiful and I like the concept behind it, but I do think there are ...

Go with the teenagerish tone of number two, except add some quirks, like old fashioned words.