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Re: Teeny bubbles
Poem #7 - Untitled Goodbye dear friend, fare well, And cry not for me So carelessly. Save your tears For the years to come Because When all is done- Goodbye ...
Apr 30, 2012 -
Re: What are some good tips on how to write an opening sentance
Have you written your novel yet? Having a good opening is like hitting the green button at the right time and getting a super boost on Mariokart. It starts you ...
Apr 18, 2012 -
Re: Journal
Progress journals are great things to keep. I find mine has helped because I always do a quick 'what's happening' wordwar before (and sometimes after) I write. It helps me ...
Apr 17, 2012 -
Re: Pay Attention
"Look at what's selling; that is your best hope of making something worth reading." I don't agree in every circumstance- some writers are better at picking up on trends and ...
Apr 17, 2012 -
Re: How to stay on track?
Hmm... My latest novel has only four main characters, a significant part of the novel is spent listening to the main two bicker, their interactions and how they grow from ...
Apr 12, 2012 -
Re: Their last words before you shot them...
"Both at the same time, okay. Three, two, one."
Apr 12, 2012 -
Re: Why ask Why?
Why is that my cat, weighing about 5lbs and being roughly 1.5ft in length, still insists on taking up 80% of my bed?
Apr 12, 2012 -
Re: Opinions Desperately Wanted
Oh gosh that made my head spin XD I was thinking fantasy because some of the concepts seem flawed, I guess because I can't imagine it turning that way, it ...
Apr 12, 2012 -
Re: Opinions Desperately Wanted
Odd XD It's a psycho-thriller, but maybe fantasy would also be a catagory to incorperate. Women are significantly less likely to be homophobic than men, so why is this woman ...
Apr 11, 2012 -
Re: Ideas of Splitting the First Chapter?
Nice Title :) I adore lengthy chapters, especially writing them. One thing to consider is your audiance. Children and young adults prefer shorter chapters, but fast readers sometimes prefer longer ...
Apr 11, 2012 -
Re: Ideas for my poem.
What to write about; Something you know about- must of poetry is visualisation and philosophy, so if you're trying to write about something foreign to you then you don't have ...
Apr 11, 2012 -
Re: Errg need help
I don't entirely agree that you *have* to know the ending when you start, I usually don't. When the beginning works and the ending is dull, sometimes it's because you've ...
Apr 11, 2012 -
Re: Teeny bubbles
Poem #6 Oh quiet heart, what words you whisper. Spin them round and watch them fall, Like dust. Polka dot speckles mark the air, with the cotton-bud warmth Of the ...
Apr 9, 2012 -
Re: Teeny bubbles
Poem #5 - Reflection The mirrors illusion of deformity and disgust. The shadows delusion of vanity by measure and scale. Scorned by the source that bore its face it mirages ...
Apr 9, 2012 -
Re: Teeny bubbles
Poem #4 is dedicated to Crescent, and can be found here:
Apr 9, 2012