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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken into Fragments

    The first two lines work really well as a hook, and I certainly like that you put "used" in bold. The line, "My heart shattered / and I can't find ...

    Aug 11, 2014


You own everything that happened to you. Tell your stories. If people wanted you to write warmly about them, they should have behaved better.
— Anne Lamott