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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken into Fragments

    The first two lines work really well as a hook, and I certainly like that you put "used" in bold. The line, "My heart shattered / and I can't find ...

    Aug 11, 2014


He who has a why to live for can bear almost any how.
— Fredrich Nietzche (Philosopher)